Tuesday, February 12, 2008
technical analysis
I’m not sure what I want to write about so I thought I would brainstorm and one of the best ways is to write for 5 minutes straight. I know the topic is health and we can write on anything we want. I was thinking the easiest would be on eating disorders and the effects it has on teens. Maybe I could say what the reasons are for starting a eating disorder, the effects long term and short term. Im not sure I feel like that’s to simple but I really don’t want to do it on heath care in the united states, but it is such a big problem in our society today. Well maybe I could if I did it on something like comparing socialisms and free market health care. I would defiantly argue for free market because I thing social health care would reduce the quality of health care and I would rather have good and expensive then bad and cheap. I would also want to do eating disorders because I had a few good friends in high school who had bulimia and I would like to learn more about it. But I’m worried that I won’t have enough to say about it or there won’t be enough diversity in the research and it will all say they same thing. I could also do something that’s not eating disorders exactly. I would want my audience to be Jr. high girls or maybe elementary age because if you educate early there is less of a chance of them developing it. WATCO eating disorders on young women’s health, Claim: eating disorders have a negative effect on young women’s health. Reason: because eating disorders are not a natural part of the digestive system. IA: anything that is not a natural part of the digestive system will have a negative effect on young women’s health.
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